people who say that they're blunt and don't sugar coat things is usually their shield to hide behind when their tone is defensive and aggressive
like dude we don't care if you criticize but like chill and be nicer about it
Aspiring filmmaker and gigantic fan of EZA.
One other time it stopped working and I redid it and now its fine. I would recommend what Kristen said.
@KenshoD link to the full playthrough? I can't find it
Thank you for this feedback. I definitely agree on what you said about the long take and should have done so. Originally the script was much longer and would have been possible to do the shot you're thinking of in the elevator but I shortened it a lot to lessen the blow that the actors had to memorize (I didn't find actors for the shoot until a few days prior). Now that I look at the first I can see that this was a mistake. I should have also let the moment when she's in the elevator breathe as well.
As for the second film, luckily these are just cut changes which can always happen. :)
Thanks again for the feedback, this is really good.
Names Obby (or Evan) and I'm a soon-to-be-graduated film student. Here I will post films that I've worked on in some way, either as a director, producer, or assistant director. I also have loads of short film scripts, a feature idea, and a pitch for an animated TV show but those I don't really want to post unless there's a demand for them
Here's my films though:
A long-take short film for my directing class final.
Another assignment for my final. Could not use fancy audio equipment so it sounds bad. Sorry.
Myself and two other film students and our search for a local urban legend.
A short documentary that I planned, shot, and edited all in a single week about an aspiring musician.
I was a producer on the pilot episode of this short film series.
I was producer on episode 4 as well.
I have a few more on my Youtube channel so if you guys want to give a look-see I won't mind.
In the spring I plan on producing a script that I wrote called "The Special". Will act as my capstone project for my senior year of film school.
Please leave feedback or criticism below. I welcome any and all comments. :)
I would love a 2016 series, which in my opinion is probably more useful than a best of series of events that just happened.